Dawn Finlayson
Monday 27 March 2006
Felt it was time to take a look at the things we are supposed to do before day 2 of the learning team meeting, and work out what needs to be incorporated into next terms planning. (Already did this to an extent but lost all the work through an error in the blog so have been putting off doing it again since then! :( )
Shirley's list of things to do:
I think she said we could just focus on points 1-6, but looking over it, it seems like we haven't been doing only those ones! And it doesn't really mention talking partners...
Anyway, one thing at a time:
Our Success Criteria are sort of based on what P3 are doing (as I have p1-3), and then brought down a bit for P1 and 2. The children came up with them and gradually refined them over a period of weeks - based on the model stories I was reading/telling. They started off by saying what was good about the model story - what made it a good imaginative story. Initially they came up with things like 'it had a fairy in it', 'it had magic in it', 'it was funny', 'it was exciting', 'it was made up', 'it had a good ending'. So we made a list on the flip chart of all the things 'that make a good imaginative story'. I didn't refer to them as success criteria at all. The next week, we read a story that wasn't fantasy, to get away from the fact that imaginative stories have to have fairies and magic in! We added to the 'things that make a good imaginative story' list as we went along. Then, we sorted the list into things that the story MUST be (it must have a good ending, must be made up) and things it COULD be (happy, funny, have magic etc). Eventually, we agreed that all of the COULD list was just 'things that make it interesting' - and that it must be interesting in one way or another, so we added 'interesting' to our success criteria. I was a bit concerned that the children were having lots of great ideas, but that they weren't getting down to the writing in sentences with finger spaces between the words! So I modelled a story on the board with no finger spaces or sentences, and they told me what was wrong with it. Then they decided (with a little prompting!) that those needed to be part of 'what makes a good story' too, so we added those. So in the end, our list has - good beginning- good ending- made-up- interesting- full stops and capital letters- finger spacesWe've also worked a little on the writers craft task, and for that we have added 'continues the same story'. I introduced the term success criteria, we talked about what it means to succeed, and how a successful story means one that is good. To make a successful story we have to include all of the success criteria in our story. I think they've got it - and they seem to understand what the SC are for. Certainly their writing has improved! P1 of course are just writing a little - 1 or 2 'sentences' with a lot of support, but they do try hard to think of something interesting to say, and to remember their finger spaces. We've recently decided that on each writing day, we (the CA and I) will pick a particular success criteria for them to focus on (or maybe 2), rather than trying to do them all. So it's all been a long process but I feel like they worked them all out themselves and that had probably made the difference. It has taken till now for their SC to match the ones that were in my plans - and we're more than half way through the term. But we're getting there.
I'm quite pleased that I let them take their time throughout the term to find out the 'important' success criteria. I'll probably do it the same way next term, although it may be a bit more clear cut for functional writing. In the end, we let the P2's and 3's choose the success criteria for P1 - they chose the ones which they thought were the most important but also achievable, which was great as it meant they showed more appreciation of the younger children's work. I haven't really used success criteria in other areas of the curriculum, although we did, as referred to before, use it with the windchimes (where it worked well also). But I feel it would also be beneficial in group tasks such as maths and comprehension, but just don't seem to be able to adjust my day enough to fit it in, although I'd love to! I feel that really, when you have such a range of abilities and groups, (for instance for reading we have 8 groups, ranging from P1 non-readers who still need some help to point to individual words, to P3 confident readers who easily read short novels, plays and poems) that it is hard to find the time to introduce SC with every group when you are teaching them all seperately. In subjects such as ES and writing, where the introduction is done as a class, it is much easier. I feel in a lot of ways the children would benefit from more whole class teaching with follow up work in groups, with support or independantly, and that would also make it a lot easier to use the SC in these areas. We'll see...
to be continued...